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June 22nd, 2008 @ 12:04PM
My Daughter is experimenting with some creative writing....
I always wanted a tattoo, but I never thought my first tattoo would be the bullet you plunged through my heart.
I always wanted a lot of piercings, I just never thought I would have to call a hundred scars up my wrists "piercings".
So when you watch the bandages fall down off my body, and reveal the words, I love you, know that I never got over you.
If I did, you wouldn't be sitting in the hospital waiting room, waiting for the doctor to come out and say, "she didn't make it".
I won't go up to "heaven" I'll be down in Hell thanking the devil for taking all the pain away.
London Altman 2008
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ShadowMom
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Date: June 23, 2008 @ 2:34 PM
Dark words from one so young, but pain is universal, isn't it? The part that jumps out at me is, "If I did, you wouldn't be sitting in the hospital waiting room, waiting for the doctor to come out and say, "she didn't make it"... because it implies something even worse. Very thoughtful and well-phrased. Taking after Mom in the writing department, aren't you?
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Mojosnake
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Date: June 23, 2008 @ 2:37 PM
great emotional stuff.....
does you daughter have dyed black hair and pale skin? this type of brilliance usually flows from these types....
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