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Journal - April 6th, 2008 @ 6:42AM

The Flame

All alone through seemingly endless years
I valiantly protected a simple tiny flame
That refused to die out in the crushing
Blackness of the void, though I chose
To dwell within it almost voluntarily.

Harsh and rough and violent were the
Hands that pushed and pulled and
Controlled me in that dark and lonely
Abyss trying with a desperate evil to
Suffocate and extinguish my tiny flame.

But somewhere high above all that chaos
A faint light glowed steadily and inviting
And it called to my tiny flame with words
Of undeniable truth and unending love
Offering a comfort I could not even imagine.

Then all unexpected the familiar hands of a
Warrior reached into that black insanity and
With a song of triumph pulled me free as my
Tiny flame rejoined that eternal light while the
Souls of angels lifted voices of everlasting joy.


Crystal Rose Rhynes
2008



User Comments

Rockaorpete
Date: April 6, 2008 @ 1:36 PM
Beautifully written & such an uplifting ending.
Bill - you are the Warrior... an don't we know it! High Five!
RockBOWILLIE
Date: April 6, 2008 @ 1:49 PM
i have to agree..
and im glad to see new written poetry
coming up over here..its been a while
Hug
Othermiraclemaker
Date: April 7, 2008 @ 12:40 AM
Beautiful and uplifting, very moving, and well written
Cloud 9
Alternativemandolinlady
Date: April 7, 2008 @ 1:45 PM
What talent you have, a women of words and beautiful they are too Love
I do hope you are having these poems published.
AdminShadowMom
Date: April 10, 2008 @ 9:42 AM
I am a bit late, but I never forget! I like the image of the flames, but I think as much as love they are strength, and it's a strength that shines in both of you. And together... you are invincible. Well-written, lady, a touching poem of power and faith. 'Twas meant to be Nodding High Five!
OtherDistilled1
Date: April 10, 2008 @ 9:45 AM
great poem should be lyrics whens the song coming????

 

 

 

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GTOriginal:
Hug Tulip Thank You Sun
1 day 7 hours 11 minutes ago

Distilled1:
Waving
1 day 16 hours 24 minutes ago

WildasRapids:
thank you :) (Smile)
2 days 4 hours 21 minutes ago

Rodrica:
Hiya! :-)) (Very Happy) Thanks for checking out the collab with Swampy Cheers His guitar was smokin on that one Nodding Hope all's good with you & Bill Hug
2 days 12 hours 35 minutes ago

GTOriginal:
Clapping Thanks Crystal for checkin' out my Sharon song... Hug Sun
2 days 15 hours 42 minutes ago

DeadraveN:
not yet, but I keep hopin' My Fingers Are Crossed
1 week 2 days 3 hours 8 minutes ago

GTOriginal:
Yeah but that puppy was lookin' at me the same way. Frightened
1 week 4 days 23 hours 4 minutes ago

BOWILLIE:
porn in the morn..sure why not
Rolling On Floor Laughing!
1 week 4 days 23 hours 41 minutes ago

GTOriginal:
This morning I was stuck in traffic for so long, the dog in the car next to me kept turning into a chicken leg until I blinked and turned it back into a dog...
Dog Turkey Leg
1 week 5 days 1 minute ago

DeadraveN:
well, I may not be a mom, but I gots these cool shades 3D Glasses
1 week 5 days 4 hours 55 minutes ago

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